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Can I have your honest opinion :)

Y30

Hi

I wrote something & I need an honest opinion on how good/ bad it is

So if you have a few free minutes I'd love to hear your opinion



Thanks :)

See also

Living in Egypt: the expat guideActivity-Based ConversationsTraveling in EgyptMost common scams in EgyptEgyptian man/ European woman, opinion?
leprechaun1188

oh wow...honestly, exceptionally well written. it has depth, it has power, it has multiple tiers of a story to it. Great stuff. Have you written much more?

Y30

Hi leprechaun,

Thanks for taking the time to read it :)

I'm glad you liked it, :)

yes I've written a lot of other stuff along the years ( I have 2 copy books at home full of what my mom used to call my gibberish)I just need to get down to typing them :D but there is some of it on that same blog

The Chronological order is off as well, I don't post by date.  Just by how I feel & the articles I just write them in the spur of the moment :).

I've read your blog as well really nice & up to date on current events (i.e: The stolen Van Gogh) :)

Eypicanmeraty

I like it. It's very nice. Keep it up It def not gibberish ;)

Y30

Hi Eypicanmeraty,

Thanks for taking the time to read it :)

& its gr8 that you liked it :)

Michaelrazor

just from my point of view...
sorry i did not read it but i wanted to tell you that
if you believe in what you wrote you don't need to ask anyon's opinion, because from life experience, human being will always have different colours, so no one will tell you same.
only time you need to know what others think is after you publish it :)
your thoughts are yours so if you believe in them just go ahead and publish them or post them else where.. in the end
who cares... words are just words for me, actions speaks better than words... sorry not negative just i belive that i do not need to let anyone give me a opinion about something i believe in if you ask others then you are skeptic about what you wrote..
be true be yourself be strong be rebelious lol

Y30

@Michaelrazor

Thanks for your comment you wrote even more than anybody else who read it :)

I do believe in myself but I don't know how to publish, or post else where I'm not a professional write this is just a hoby to me :)

So as for believing in myself I do but movies worth billions of dollars of budget have early screenings does that mean they don't believe in what they've done?

My goal first & foremost was that I'd have a constructive/destructive critic may be lurking in the shadows here which hasn't happened as of yet:)

But may be he'll/she'll come along any moment now ;)

Alex_egy

I like it too, keep it up

Y30

Thanks for reading it AlexGuy  glad you liked it :)